Re - write compare&contrast article
I like to go to a camp to learn leadership and English during vacation. Also, in camps I can make many friends. Also, I do not need to go to any academies! Therefore, I found some English camps.
First, Big Apple Camp. This camp helps students to be ready for taking test such as SAT, there are many art classes. Students can improve their English ability and they can learn other cultures. Hoewver, the cap has a too short period of staying. Students may speak in Korea and therre is no outdoor activities.
Secondly, I'll tell you about Ranch West Camp. In the Ranch West Camp, students can learn outside activities, they can stdy what students want, it has a perfect length of studying so students can find their own talents and can improve independence while they stay with unknown people. But, it focuses too narrow so it can be boring.
As conclusion, I prefer Ranch West Camp than Big Apple Camp, because I like outdoor activities and I waant to study what I want. Also, it has a perfect length to study. So, I prefer Ranch West Camp than Big Apple Camp.
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2011년 8월 17일 수요일
2011년 8월 12일 금요일
Unhappiness
<Bear Attack Summary>
It is so rare to be attacked by a bear.
If you run inro a bear, the bear will more afraid of you and go away by itself.
But you should stay calm if you run into a bear.
From 1839 to 1994, 101 people died from drowning but only 5 people were killed by bears.
To decrease the posibility from the bear attack, traveling in groups is one method, because bears don't like to attack groups of four or more people.
Also, bears are much more likely to attack if you try to run away.
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<Article>
What causes unhappiness? If you believe that the main goal in life is to be happy, then being unhappy is probably the number one thing you will want to avoid at all cost. Feeling happy is quite easy once you know how. Unfortunately, so is being unhappy. This article will give you a couple of insights into what causes this emotion and will give you some tips on how you can create greater happiness in your life. Whether or not this will work for you will depend on your willingness to just be.
If you have asked yourself, "Why am I unhappy" and had a hard time figuring out the answer, then the first thing you will need to know is where unhappiness comes from. Any emotion is a cause of your physiology and your focus. If you are feeling down, it's because you are focusing on things that will make you feel down. Not only that, it's likely that your body posture is generally down as well. These two things combined will make anyone feel unhappy.
Whether you are unhappy at work or unhappy with life in general, what you will want to do is to notice what you are consistently focusing on. If you are constantly focusing on why life sucks, you're going to feel lousy. How can you not? If you focus on how you will never find happiness, chances are, you never will.
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<Summary>
Unhappy is probably the number one thing you will want to avoid at all cost.
Any emotion is a cause of your physiology and your focus. If you are feeling down, it's because you are focusing on things that will make you feel down.
Whether you are unhappy at work or unhappy with life in general, what you will want to do is to notice what you are consistently focusing on. If you are constantly focusing on why life sucks, you're going to feel lousy. How can you not? If you focus on how you will never find happiness, chances are, you never will.
Bear Attacks (Notes)
<Bear Attacks>
Main Points
* If you run into a bear, the bear will be more afraid of you and go away by itself.
* From 1839 to 1994, 101 people died from drowning but only 5 people were killed by bears.
* So it is rare to be attacked by a bear.
* To decrease the posibility from the bear attack, traveling in groups is one method.
* You should stay calm if you run into a bear.
* Bears don't like to attack groups of four or more people.
* Bears are much more likely to attack if you try to run away.
Extra Informantions
* If people hiking in the North America's back wood, they might experience some fear of being attacked by a bear.
*It is more likely that you will died in a car crash.
*In the Yellowstone National Park in the U.S. statistics show that you are more likely to drown than to be attacked by a bear.
Main Points
* If you run into a bear, the bear will be more afraid of you and go away by itself.
* From 1839 to 1994, 101 people died from drowning but only 5 people were killed by bears.
* So it is rare to be attacked by a bear.
* To decrease the posibility from the bear attack, traveling in groups is one method.
* You should stay calm if you run into a bear.
* Bears don't like to attack groups of four or more people.
* Bears are much more likely to attack if you try to run away.
Extra Informantions
* If people hiking in the North America's back wood, they might experience some fear of being attacked by a bear.
*It is more likely that you will died in a car crash.
*In the Yellowstone National Park in the U.S. statistics show that you are more likely to drown than to be attacked by a bear.
2011년 8월 10일 수요일
Bear Attacks (Article)
<Bear Attacks>
When people go hiking in the back woods of North America, they might experience some fear of being attacked by a bear.
Although it is possible that you will be attacked , it is extremely improbabale. In fact, chances are that if you run into a bear, the bear will be more afraid of you and go away by itself.
It is more likely that you will die in a car crash on your way to the back woods thatn by being attacked by a bear.
In the Yellowstone National Park in the U.S., statistics show that you are more likely to drown than to be attacked by a bear. In the period between 1839 and 1994, 101 people died from drowning but only 5 people werekillede by grixxly bears.
However, if you are still worried about bear attacks, tehre are several ways to reduce the chances of being attacked by a bear.
Traveling in groups is one way to reduce the chances. Bears are very unlikely to attack groups of four or more people. Also, stay calm if you run into a bear. Bears are much more likely to attack if you try to run away.
When people go hiking in the back woods of North America, they might experience some fear of being attacked by a bear.
Although it is possible that you will be attacked , it is extremely improbabale. In fact, chances are that if you run into a bear, the bear will be more afraid of you and go away by itself.
It is more likely that you will die in a car crash on your way to the back woods thatn by being attacked by a bear.
In the Yellowstone National Park in the U.S., statistics show that you are more likely to drown than to be attacked by a bear. In the period between 1839 and 1994, 101 people died from drowning but only 5 people werekillede by grixxly bears.
However, if you are still worried about bear attacks, tehre are several ways to reduce the chances of being attacked by a bear.
Traveling in groups is one way to reduce the chances. Bears are very unlikely to attack groups of four or more people. Also, stay calm if you run into a bear. Bears are much more likely to attack if you try to run away.
2011년 8월 8일 월요일
2011년 8월 5일 금요일
What the world eats
Today, I saw some pictures named 'What the world eats.'
There were 16 pictures but I will write about Chad and United States
There were 16 pictures but I will write about Chad and United States
2011년 8월 3일 수요일
Chain Writing
1. Write one or two sentence.
2. Pass notebook to person next to you.
3. Write under (or next to) the sentence someone wrote before.
4. The whole page should be ONE story.
5. Edit and post one blog.
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Once upon a time, there was a girl named Jane and there was Sally. Also, there was paradox. There was Axel and he killed all the girls including Paradox and Axel met the Jacob. And they started to fight, Then Jacob thrown up what he ate, so the people came out to fight. The people were so angry so they started to fight. Fight.Fight.Fight..!! But, Jacob ate paradox and he ran wawy, Paradox started to kick in Jacob's stomach, but Jacob ate Axel and then he ate Lee and Paul but then he start then out because he had a tummy ache, Then all of them fusied to sorm a moster called GLPS digimon, That monster was invinvible and couldn't be defeated, So everyone was attacked by the monster. But only one guy survived. That was Mr. Hwang. Mr. Hwang went in front of GLPS digimon and claimed "E.O.P VIOLATION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ARRANGE SHOES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" GLPS digimon spoke Korean in of Mr. Hwang so Mr. Hwang hit him and gave him EOP paper. He also gave 3 yellow cards and 5 red cards for ripping E.O.P paper. Suddenly, his legs bended. Mr. Hwang patted him and said "gOOD BOY." Then he started to apologize to Mr. Hwang, although he was not intemding to Mr. Hwang said to Jacob, "GIVE ME SALLY AND JANE TO ME". Jacob gave Sally and Jane to Mr. Hwang and Salled killed Jacob!
2. Pass notebook to person next to you.
3. Write under (or next to) the sentence someone wrote before.
4. The whole page should be ONE story.
5. Edit and post one blog.
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Once upon a time, there was a girl named Jane and there was Sally. Also, there was paradox. There was Axel and he killed all the girls including Paradox and Axel met the Jacob. And they started to fight, Then Jacob thrown up what he ate, so the people came out to fight. The people were so angry so they started to fight. Fight.Fight.Fight..!! But, Jacob ate paradox and he ran wawy, Paradox started to kick in Jacob's stomach, but Jacob ate Axel and then he ate Lee and Paul but then he start then out because he had a tummy ache, Then all of them fusied to sorm a moster called GLPS digimon, That monster was invinvible and couldn't be defeated, So everyone was attacked by the monster. But only one guy survived. That was Mr. Hwang. Mr. Hwang went in front of GLPS digimon and claimed "E.O.P VIOLATION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ARRANGE SHOES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" GLPS digimon spoke Korean in of Mr. Hwang so Mr. Hwang hit him and gave him EOP paper. He also gave 3 yellow cards and 5 red cards for ripping E.O.P paper. Suddenly, his legs bended. Mr. Hwang patted him and said "gOOD BOY." Then he started to apologize to Mr. Hwang, although he was not intemding to Mr. Hwang said to Jacob, "GIVE ME SALLY AND JANE TO ME". Jacob gave Sally and Jane to Mr. Hwang and Salled killed Jacob!
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