I will compare and comtrast with Big Apple Camp and Ranch West Camp. First, I'll tell about Big Apple Camp. This camp is ready for take tests, there are many art clases, we can improve our English ability and we can learn other cultures. However, it's too intensive, it has too shourt period, students may speak Korean and there is no outdoor activities.
Secondly, I'll tell about Ranch West Camp. There, we can learn outside activities, you can study what you want, it has perfect legth, you can find your talents and you can improive independence with unkown people. But, it focus too naroow and students can tiritng to do outdoor activities.
For the conclusion, I prefer Ranch West Camp than Big Apple Camp.
Nice, but you need to work on the proper essay format and trying to use the transition words a little more.
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